kalabor106's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Little Red Riding Hood Cover]

I can see you put more time into this drawing than the others. Are you pushing for a dramatic setting. sort of like those horror cover art you see on posters?
Here are a few things I feel might help-
The ladies mid section seems a bit long and broad(no body curve)
Her foot stepping is a bit awkward as it looks more like its bending sideways instead of forwards. The hood on her head seems a bit rigid instead of soft. It needs to be laying on her hair folding in certain spots.

The wolf seems like it needs to be more hidden in the dark so all you can see is the face and hands sticking out of the darkness. If that's the final project plan then never mind.
More muzzle and hair detail on the wolf would help give a more scary looking wolf.
The Wolves eyes need more detail to define where the iris and pupil are at. So we can see his evil gaze better as he is peering down on her.
Hope these suggestions help. I can tell you are improving.

Dangerice responds:

Thanks man. I realized earlier that I may have messed up on her abdominal region with the lack of curve. I wasn't really able to find an accurate way to get her knee to look right. My art teacher told me that the legs looked right that way and not to stress too much about it. I think I may try and see if I can change it to look correct tomorrow. I'm not certain how to define furniture, but I'll see if I can try some things. I'm not entirely sure about the wolf, but I'll find some examples to help the detail a bit. I plan on taking a bunch of art classes next Semester, and I may even be able to get my teacher to give me an Independent Animation class if it fits his schedule. I really appreciate your feedback man, and I'm going to try more different things to keep improving!

[1,000,000 Art Portal Views!!]

Man your stuff is amazing as always. I just stare at it thinking how in the world you do this. And of course to find all the little extras hidden things you place in your drawings. I can totally understand how you got a million views easily. With so many armor like characters I'm surprised you have not done your version of the Warhammer 40K universe.

deathink responds:

Thanks a real lot rambo... errrr kalabor! I get asked about warhammer a lot, but I don't really know anything about it so I might never make any hahahah. However, you never know...

[...kick ass and chew bubble gum. (Roddy Piper tribute)]

Put on the Glasses!
Should make this into a game.

deathink responds:

I got one that can see!!!!

[Sketching Practice]

Try drawing with a lighter line. Tends to help shape your drawing easier. Then you can go back with darker lines.

[Armored Mutant Barto]

pretty rad. Have some cool light work on the character.

Saminat responds:

Thanks! I always enjoy drawing neon lighting, it's fun!

[Caught Off Gaurd]

Really like the the colors for this. The line work in my opinion really helps bring the characters for the foreground.

[Re-Boot]

So many hidden objects in this picture Ghost Busters, Penicorn, NES game and controller NGs Tank, lighter and so much more. Had me looking for all the images in there I could find.
I wounder thou. Did he really need a scope on the handgun to achieve this head shot?
Nice work man.

deathink responds:

He was also camping!

[Spike Mario]

Spiny Mario suit dose not look to comfortable. He been rethink his designs. Like the sketch man.

[Reflection]

First time I saw this I really thought it was done with chalk. But with color pencils!? That is crazy good. You should really think about doing more color pencil work.

[Everclear]

The shading with pin dots all over the face is Freaking amazing.